machinist story: a milestone

There is a new update to the machinist project! Check it out !! https://gueepo.itch.io/machinist-story


Upon “releasing” my little game project idea out in the wild, my goal shifted to having semi-frequent updates. I’m calling the first update the “iteration milestone” because the goal is to work only on quality of life improvements.

A lot of things about this videogame still suck, and I would like to address as many of those things I can before moving into actually designing more battles, writing more chapters, and making more music.

I like to think of this game in three different areas: Cutscenes, Battles, and Dialogue.

Cutscenes

Most of the work on cutscenes happens on a sheet of paper where I need to write, rewrite, and add notes on top of the game script. Translating all this into a cutscene isn’t that difficult, honestly. It just looks very ugly.

Can you believe I’m paid to code professionally?

I like to think that… This is a cutscene. A cutscene is just a bunch of scripted commands, but I hate this so much, but it works. So I probably won’t be overthinking this too much until it stops working! When that happens, I will be mad at myself for not thinking about this earlier.

Battles

The big question here, beyond quality of life, is how to make combat interesting.

Maybe if “Machinist Story” (Working Title) ever make it across the finish line, I can add traditional RPG elements to the game, like items, skills, party members, or any form of customization that changes how the battles play out. But these things are definitely not making it into this one. So, how *do* I make battles more interesting?

The first step was improving quality of life. The new update feature things such as:

  • Being able to see how far your character can move/attack while navigating through the UI;
  • Graying out options that you are not able to use anymore in this turn;
  • Showing how much damage was dealt; and
  • Being able to navigate the map when it’s your turn so you can see how far the enemies can move and attack.

A big challenge here is the AI. There’s just so many variables to account for. What’s the shortest path to the enemy? Which of the four positions around them I want to be at? How can I not obstruct my mates and let them kill the enemy too? What is the best path to get to the enemy if I can’t get to it this turn?

The good thing is that I don’t need to worry about none of that right now. So I won’t. Moving on.

Dialogue

My biggest issue with how dialogues are portrayed is that it isn’t clear who is speaking, and the dialogue boxes are ugly and always in the same place. I wanted to add names, portraits, and make the dialogues come out of the character.

I would like something more like this.

But unfortunately, I have spent way too much time on making the battle a little bit prettier, and making the cutscene code a little less ugly.

What’s Next?

Working on monthly iterations has been an interesting idea. And although I really want to add more stuff into this game, so the game has more battles, more cutscenes, more, more, more! I am faced with a sad reality: That intro cutscenes *SUCKS.*

So, the next iteration is simply working on the script, incorporating the pages of notes I have into the actual script, and, who knows, if time allows, I can start writing the script for the rest of the game, and not just Act I.

I will probably tackle some quality of life and small improvements here and there as well. And I expect to do *A LOT* of work on the cutscene system to improve it, but the overall goal here is simply to tell a better story in a better way. (:


2025 – machinist lives

ok, here we go.

I don’t even remember how to write anymore! Most of the times when I think about wanting to make videogames on the side and writing about it, I think that a good measure of progress is to evaluate myself monthly, that is, a monthly blog post. Lately, these are closer to one single blog post a year. I have reflected on the why that is enough times, publicly, and in private, and it doesn’t really matter. What matters is that I want to make a videogame, and I want to write about making a videogame.

The issue here is that I’m not really making a videogame. I like to think of this as working on what I call “the machinist project” where a videogame is one of its public apparitions. “The Machinist Project” resides mostly on a soft cover red moleskine that I have in my apartment where I write long handed short stories. Up to this day there are twenty six little stories in there, and the “videogame” I have been working on is story number thirteen. That means that when I work on a videogame, I am thinking of the possibility of making twenty five others.

As a living and breathing world, the world contained on that soft cover red moleskine goes through a bunch of shit. Ranging from Board Games Tuesdays on your local tavern, musicians getting upset because they aren’t getting the busiest spot on a friday evening on said local tavern, to a swordsman getting into combat with a demon from an alternate reality and ending up in a parallel universe, train heists and political intrigue.

The point I’m trying to make here is that this is, in a way, a real world.

What I’m trying to get at is that there are bands and musicians in this world, and I quite enjoy my time sitting down on my computer, chugging down a pack of Sapporo and staring down at MIDI tracks on garage band, reading on music theory and questioning my ability of coming up with good melodies while playing pentatonic scales on a guitar tuned to Standard C. What I’m trying to say here is that I’m trying to make music, and music is another facet of this project.

the videogame

Check it out on itch.io: https://gueepo.itch.io/machinist-story

Setting goals for yourself and failing to achieve them is a tale as old as time. Here is the first iteration of what I wanted to achieve this year.

I really like The Machinist Project and I wrote a few good chapters for it, and I’m tired of not having anything to show from it. So I want to have a demo. The demo should be the first act of the first story, and that means 2 cutscenes and 2 battles.

I do really like The Machinist Project. And those few good chapters are so good that they made it through my randomly conducted script reviews mostly intact. And I am still tired of not having anything to show from it.

I haven’t made any significant progress by November, so the idea shifted towards having anything by the end 2025. Literally anything.

That means scuffing things out, cutting this “minimum viable product” into something even more minimum, and trying to keep the “viable” part in there.

This project only needs to be a thing that can be executed, and then you watch a little cutscene, play through a little battle, and then watch another cutscene that resolves the conflict. Things can roll from there. I can upload it to itch.io, keep updating it, and making devlogs.

More importantly, I can show it to people.

“Show it to people” being such a high priority might come off as “impure,” like, what? Am I working on a project just for the sake of other people? Ew! But it’s just that it’s annoying to talk about this thing that doesn’t exist, especially when it’s been over a year. How about YOU try telling your friends you have been doing this thing for a year and then show nothing from it to anyone.

With all that in mind, I started making use of all the 30min breaks I could find throughout my day to add or fix something on the game. And I managed to get the cutscene, dialogue, and battle system into a decent state in less than 2 months. The wonders of consistently showing up to work on a project!

What I’m saying in way too many words is that I finally have a “minimum viable product,” or “proof of concept.” Just something that I am going to show a few people and ask: “Is this anything?”

It can be found on itch.io: https://gueepo.itch.io/machinist-story

What’s Next?

It has been less than 24 hours and I already have a laundry list of things to improve on it. The videogame idea seemed to be received positively, and the fact that it now exists gives a lot of mental clarity.

So, what’s next? Iterating on the script so the characters and the world are a bit more fleshed out. Tweaking the gameplay, and adding quality of life stuff before even moving into adding more content.

After that, adding more content and finishing the whole first Act of the game! That’s three more scenes, which means three more cutscenes and three more battles! (Subject to change)

And, of course, making music for the game, as well as a soundtrack EP. YES. These two are different.

Who knows how long all that will take!